#009 | Chapter 1, Page 9

5 Responses to “#009 | Chapter 1, Page 9”

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   Micah
   September 23, 2010 at 6:44 pm

   Well, that explains the green eyes and the sudden beeping! Here I thought a bomb was about to go off.
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     Kneon Transitt
     September 23, 2010 at 6:53 pm

     Ha ha ha. Well, there will be lots to blow up. Just wait. 😉
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   Kambrea Pratt
   September 23, 2010 at 10:16 pm

   This is just necessary character development. It will all make sense soon. I know it seems strange, but there is a reason.
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   Fiction is Real
   May 1, 2013 at 11:36 am

   Man totally taken off guard. Never was expecting a girl and that it was all just a dream. Loving the suspense of having to manually click through to each page. Great work. Keep it up.
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   aslandus
   April 8, 2014 at 6:50 pm

   Her mom is probably going to tell her it’s Saturday or something…